Friday, 29 April 2011

The sin of submission

No, I didn't know peacocks could climb trees either. That's the great thing about life, it continually throws us curve balls, surprises and surprise curve balls.

I recently broke a cardinal rule of writing: thou shalt not revisit an agent who hast declined thy work. I started with a letter outlining our previous interactions and explaining why I now thought that agent was appropriate. In the meantime, I revisited Standpoint and reduced down to an impressive (for me) 102,000 words - the shortest it's ever been since I first completed it, some time in the Jurassic Era.

My approach was a little more considered this time than just sending in a synopsis and manuscript sample. I also sent in some positive feedback from a publisher's editor who ultimately declined Standpoint, but who still had some good things to say about it. And I sent in a critique report I'm purchased and acted upon. And finally, I sent the positive feedback from www.youwriteon.com (look for Standpoint if you'd like to read some of it).

The agent went through everything I'd submitted and wrote back to him, indicating why they thought they were not the best fit for my work and suggesting some other places I might try.

In my response, I also asked if they'd like to see an extract from Scars & Stripes and they said yes! So now I'm in the happy position of revising chapter 1 and creating a new synopsis. Which just goes to show, as one of the characters says: If you don't ask, you don't get.

5 comments:

  1. Fantastic news, Derek! Well done! I always tells people, to get any response back from an agent is a good sign, so to have a request to read Scars & Stripes is brilliant!
    Keeping everything crossed for you.
    Debs
    xxx

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  2. Good luck with this!

    PS. I think Raymond Carver has a story where a peacock flies up into a tree??

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  3. Thanks Deb and Susan for stopping by. Of course, it's all hands to the pump now, but that's part of the rush of writing! And Susan, I loved Raymond Carver's short story collection 'Will You Please Be Quiet, Please?'. It definitely influenced some of my own stories, such as Saturday Night - http://themolotovcocktail.com/past-issues/vol-1-issue-7/saturday/

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  4. It's only fair to add that the agent in question liked the work, but felt it needed a genre agent to take it to the right publisher. However, he did suggest three lines of inquiry for me to follow up.

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  5. Good on ya, mate!

    When we lived in California, we were about 10 minutes from the county arboretum, where a couple hundred peacocks lived. They would fly over the fences constantly, get into peoples' yards, and wander around the neighborhood. It wasn't unusual to be driving down the street and see a peacock sitting in a jacaranda tree, looking down through your windshield as though you were the odd one out.

    Another tip: You don't want to get in between a peacock in full display and the intended recipient of his display.

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